Fun! Nobody likes aggressive UFOs. :)
Triple A FTW :D Except when it’s shooting at you… Good story, I might sequel this if I get the chance :D
Triple A FTW :D
Except when it’s shooting at you… Good story, I might sequel this if I get the chance :D
Awesome. I loved the line about the drunk, flying hippo. That really made me giggle. I also like how the feel suggests WWII but doesn’t lock it into that time frame necessarily.
Hehe, nice story, you have to be cocky to pilot a plane through a thunderstorm.
I loved the mouthful of bile reminding him how much he likes flying. That sort of subtle writing and character building is my favorite.
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