Please, somebody tell me I didn’t completely kill the previous one (and you better mean it)!

Haha, definitely not. This is a wonderful continuation.

Teehee! I love this; it’s the perfect balance of oddball and icky. Now, who could the culprit be..?

I like this sequel, but the last paragraph doesn’t totally seem necessary. As readers, we’ve just received all that information, so I don’t think it needs to be recapped that soon after, especially out loud.

That said, I really like the juxtaposition of the bird innards and neat handwriting with such a formal message.