i have no clue who these ppl r, where this came from, or where its heading so if u want 2 jump in feel free

Very odd moment here, flustered and quick with lots of possible back and forward story options and impressions. Nice example of a ‘jump in midstream’ style ficly.

I agree complete with THX, only to add that you did a supurb job of describing the scene in detail. Bravo.