really like this

I love the feel of madness this has going on, but it begins to feel a bit cliched with the last line I think. It just sounds like something I’ve heard many times before.

yeah I’m gonna take out the repetition, it’s driving me insane

I like it

I really like the paragraph describing the faces of statues.

Why the apostrophe in the title? It’s Buckleying the whole thing, you’re better than that.

Aside from that, very nice work, manic artistry is a favourite theme of mine and you definitely hit home with it. That last line gave me chills.

I was hoping ‘Busted’ would be a double entendre by the end, but that slight and kind of odd disappointment does not tarnish the story at all

Most enjoyable.

Great opening, great close. All good in between.

Am I being a dumbass looking for significance in 156? Am I being more of a dumbass in not picking up on a really obvious allusion?

I like this a lot.

The imagery of the cluttered house with the tools and dust very much appealed to me. Maybe I can relate to it. Although, for me it would be motherboards and CPUs laying around.

I also enjoy the feeling of madness you were able to portray. The image in my head of this man, frantic and obsessed, is vivid.

The title is my favorite part.

nuzzle