I’m not sure about the structure of this one – that first paragraph seems quite fragmented, and the voice isn’t consistently clear, but I think I get the overall idea – and like it.

Particularly nice cliffhanger you leave us with – although I think the ramifications for whichever company caused the oil spill would be greater than the consequences for the President…

Could do with polishing, but interesting stuff – MH :)

This is almost a poem. I enjoyed it.