:( i love how you expanded on this and it’s interesting how adult you made it, like it is it’s own world, not just for children.

Ooh, wow. Well, I do beleibe in fairies. (I do! I do!) I love this: it’s just reiterating the childhood tales told. I like how Underland echoes the human world in its celebrity and diversity.
Two grammar errors that I have to pick up on:
1) First line, second par. ’it’s’ should be ‘its’
2) Third line, third par. ‘afforded’ should probably be ‘affording’, or ‘regularly appearing’ should be ‘her regular appearences’. It’s grammar that I can’t explain but know is right :P
You burst back to ficly with a bang, Mr Harmless. I do hope this doesn’t detract from your schoolwork :)

Thanks for picking me up on the grammar PJ – clearly I’m a little rusty on proofreading after all this time! MH :)

Weird and bizarre but has an epic feel, like a tongue-in-cheek action movie is about start with some very small explosions and a toy care chase scene.

good story, and good description of the ‘beliefs sustain the world’ mechanic.

who is the legless fairy mad at? poor Suzy Philips? be careful little girl!

the beginning of a tale, to be sure. I bet Susie will believe after Tangle gets to her! will he get his legs back?

I love it! I like how doubt causes maiming rather than an outright death in the fairy world. Very nice. :)

Wow, that’s great!!!

This story represents everything I envy about some other writers. The ability to imagine a world completely different and governed by alien rules.

My stuff is always so rooted in reality and I feel i lack that imagination that makes stories like this so damn good.

Funny. I wish you (or someone) had sequeled this.

Great story!

I liked this a lot, a fine twist on the normal fairy trope :)