hehe a shocking twist. I have to admit, I didn’t see it coming.

It’s a really nicely rendered scene and a nice start to a harrowing story. I don’t know if I’d call it a twist so much as more bad news after lots of bad news upon waking.

well it was a twist of the wrist….

I thought maybe she was like a mouse in a cage and had to learn to get drink or food by pushing a button. behavior conditioning experiment..

but it wasn’t a twist of a story, because I was looking for a twist that didn’t come. Not that it made the story any less great, no, it’s still a good beginning.