I like the dreamlike quality of this piece, and the abrupt end to his daydream. I do, however, spot a small inaccuracy – in the plane, the throttle is not controlled by the foot pedals.

Perhaps in his vision of what a plane or aircraft is, the throttle is pedal powered?

That is kinda an oversight on my part though.

Cute moment, and a nice entry to the challenge. Feels like maybe a steampunk sort of theme to it underlying the little moment? Would have gone nicely in the ’Twist" challenge as well.

Thanks THX. It was meant as a sort of cyberpunk/steampunk setting.

“The air in front of me compresses, the whole ship seems to quiver in fear, and then it passes into silence. I’ve left sound behind.” I love this moment in the piece. I could feel it as I read it. Bravo.