Hey guys, hope this doesn’t derail anything or violate any story elements I missed in my rapid review of the story thus far.

For everyone else, Begin the story here: http://ficly.com/stories/16559

I want in, but I’m scared that if I do, I’ll derail the awesome train that you guys have got going here. This is bloody brilliant, and Shu Sam, your grasp of Sci Fi rocks :D

Just jump in, mate!

I must admit, I’m not really sure of what’s going on here. But I still think it’s awesome.

Another great continuation! Leads right into the next of my ideas of this story. :)

I really liked this one and can’t wait to see what is coming next.

Love the story, don’t love the description of Harrigan wanting to “smack” someone. Makes it sound like a mother wanting to smack a naugthty child. I think Harrigan should want to “punch” or “flatten” someone.

Also, Harrigan “piped up” sounds like a small powerless child. Of course, he might feel that way just now. But I think of him more as a drill sergeant.