Typo at the start there with ‘say’ instead of ‘saw’. Very intense moment there that probably would have made more sense if I’d read the one before. Still, I loved the humor of the priest’s reaction and intensity.

Well you have that writer’s thing going with the weird-ass names but I can cope with that. I love where this story is going! I hope there comes some real sinning soon. :D
Sometimes you have a poor grammar thing going where you put both Norah and Ben’s voices into the same paragraph. It makes me reel a little and have to re-read a couple of time.
But I lvoe the story.