wanted to right at least another 200 characters XD This 1024 malarkey is harder than i though.

I thought this had the feel of fanfic out of an established universe/reality, so I’m glad the tags cleared that up for me. Decent action and excitement. I thought that the bit about driving him instantly mad was a bit over the top, but that’s me. The first half could use a grammar run through, but otherwise just fun sci-fi/shoot-em-up stuff.

All i could think of was established universes XD So not bad for a first try? And i only wrote it quickly, grammar has never been my strongest point