Ah, beautiful ending. The set-up is a bit slow but, having said that, it has no need to rush.

One thing: she’s cleaning the contraption, but we have to infer from context what it is.

I’m eagerly awaiting the next installment

I went back to this at your challenge entry, then read the whole thing. you added so much depth in the prequels, and now you have her picking up the pieces. The middle was dreary, but that is exactly how it should be. :) I’m glad this grew into a series for you!

whew now i have to red the sequels

a lovely atmosphere was created, along with beautiful well written descriptions. amazing job :)