Two things: 1) ‘She threw open the door’, and 2) ‘I sank my fangs’.
Tsk, tsk, tsk. A vampire story? Ok, I admit it did keep me guessing until the end. And it wasn’t in-your-face. I really did enjoy it.
I ran home to fix those errors… err… I will definitely take the extra time to proofread next time… grrr… Thanks. And yes, a vampire story It did start off as a zombie POV story but just didn’t sit well with me.
I ran home to fix those errors… err… I will definitely take the extra time to proofread next time… grrr… Thanks.
And yes, a vampire story It did start off as a zombie POV story but just didn’t sit well with me.
Jim Stitzel
Laine Grey
JC Tovil