Oh, sheesh. I should have read the tags to the story. And it’s not schizophrenia (halluciations, delusions), but dissociative identity disorder (multiple personalities). Common mistake.
i never saw it as suicide, thought she was being followed and the guy was able to kill her and then later we learn it was a man dressed as a woman, never saw the personalities. I see them now, after the tags. suggestions on how to clear that up.. he saw her in a mirror? he reached her hand out? he heard her scream come from his lips? i dunno. something.
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