Intricately descriptive.

so sad, and well I’m at a loss…it’s so dark, and haunting, but beautiful.

Thanks :)

the last line.. you repeat night.. just throws it all off. repeating black before doesn’t other me so much, but the ending does.
anyway, i don’t know what its like to be claustrophobic, but I think this must be it.

Wow completely unintentional. I’ll change it.

oh, NOW it has a sinister ending. :)

Phew!