ok i failed with the italicizing _

An amusing situation and kind of absurdly funny how the protagonist just takes it in stride and starts with the announcements.

It could really benefit from spacing it out, breaking it up into different paragraphs. For starters, it’s conventional to start a person starts a line of dialog. Also, you might want to double check some of your sentence structure.

Better, or worse? :3

Um, some of your sentence structure and grammar really detracts from what its true potential but I think the situation is interesting.