Very impressive. I especially like the line; “A delusion to control the ignorant.”
I’m not sure why, it just sounds so…suitable, I think the word is.
Nicely written, thanks for entering!

Thanks so much. I’ve heard the “delusion” word used by atheists a number of times, so that’s where I got it from. :)

The 3rd paragraph is my favorite. Very powerful. I can really see God watching over the Earth thinking these thoughts— His undying love to a resisting people.

Great job.