Very exciting moment, with an olde school naval battle feel to it. Fun sci-fi stuff, though it feels slightly isolated…or maybe I’m just not connecting today.

Yeah it probably does, because of the damned character limit. That and I decided to leave it pretty ambiguous so that any entrants had a fair amount of freedom to take it in their own direction, without being limited by constraints from my story.

I really like the tone, it’s very Battlestar Galactica-esque.