Nice twist. I honestly can say it made me laugh.

Ha! What a fantastic fairy tale!

This is fantastic, you worried for naught, and an almost TOO solid end that got me bothered and hot.

hahahaha

Nicely done muse. Reminds me of the story someone else here wrote about the maiden in the tower being rescued by a knight who turned out to be a maiden also.

Rhyming like this is hard, I give you huge credit for doing it and being able to tell a lovely story!