Poetry in prose! This dances like your characters. I think you’ve captured the ebb and flow of relationships. The second paragraph feels like the relationship is false, while the third feels more real. The last sentence ties in with the first and reiterates the theme: love comes and goes.

Wonderfully written. Very deep and poetic. I love the last line as well as the line “Days and weeks run together until the squares on the calendar lose all meaning.” Very nice.

this could be applied to any relationship, and that is why I like it so much. The simplicity of the ending is perfect.