Yikes.

heh, oops.

Very funny turn of events. The last bit got a bit cumbersome, but I know you were trying to set it up to end with the required quote. You gotta feel for the poor naked guy on the couch though. I mean, it’s not really his fault if he didn’t know she was married.

Yeah, I actually had to redo the ending because of the required quote. I had written this without adding it and my editing to include it really affects the ending.

Good work. Shouldn’t it be marked mature though? Just wondering…

To my knowledge and ability to check a box, it is marked mature.

that is classic