Good continuing exploration of Liv’s conflicted feelings, PJ. I might not be able to write the next ficly until I finish a paper for school. But I’ve got some good ideas just waiting to be unleashed!

you repeat ‘eyes’ and ‘dreams’ in there, but i like how she second guessed herself, and ended in infatuation at least. Hard to cram all that wishy-washy in there and make it sound good, though.

Im disgusted with the title. Its getting annoying and cheesy.

You could go with something like ‘Renewel’. Whenever I think my titles suck I go with one word. One word titles almost always avoid cheese somehow.