A perfect story. I loved it! I really love how it isn’t necessary a full story. It really leaves you aching for more. A+!

I agree with Ronnie! The action sequence is well written and the whole “falling action to attend to” is a great line.

I love how this is a story and a synopsis at the same time. Highly creative. Very impressive.

Thanks for the + comments, homies.

Made some minor edits to the last paragraph.

We all want to be heroes sometimes, but heroes are only born when the innocent suffer. Better perhaps to want no heroes at all.

Interesting thought, Mr. Grey.