Heck of a last line there. Another example of the story/joke ficly, and nicely done at that. Not high art or anything, but a good pun.

Sir Topham Hatt! I bet he did it…

A solid setup for a very _groan_worthy pun.

This made me laugh— my niece is a Thomas fanatic, and I know this narrative all too well I’m afraid. haha. I prefer the old episodes with george carlins voice…and I’ve noticed that for a kids show it is written exquisitely well. You’ve really captured the narrative sound here.