Just in case you didn’t know, bronze is the metal used in the Bible symbolizing sin.

deep and allegorical, i like it.
It said alot in a very small space, BRAVO

“The bronze creature towered above him, exhaling hot and bitter breath”

Try …." hot, bitter breath" maybe perhaps. I dunno it seems like a logical edit to me.

Good though. I like your stuff very much. But you need a good editor…though don’t we all… haha, I sure ain’t perfect with prose.

Thank you both.

I’d love an editor. I can always use the critiques! But be sure to stroke my ego a bit while you’re at it. :p

What do gold and silver represent in the bible?

@Jesse- Silver represents redemption and salvation. Judas sold out Jesus for 30 pieces of silver (which is $200 modern day)— which was the price of a slave. If you look in the Bible, everything that involves 30 pieces of silver involves saving or redeeming something.

Gold represents the kingdom of heaven and purification. The streets of heaven are paved in gold according to scripture. The imagery used in the Bible describes human beings being like bronze then being refined over and over until they are like pure gold.

I’d say a good 1/3 of the Bible has symbolism. http://www.newfoundationspubl.org/types.htm

Ah, interesting.