Wow I love it MJ. Something I never expected to come from my own :) I suppose if cyberchildren ever were invented there would be opposition especially in the Southern states. Loving the implications of ‘Romeo’ and the title is fucking ace!
Took me a bit to get a grasp on it, I think a consequence of ficly length and missing the initial switch in narrator. Comma placement in the sentences about the explosion completely threw me. Might be worth a revision. Lots of really cool ideas in here, like the theme Elsha mentioned as well as just taking the story somewhere other than the scrap heap.