nicely done! I like the juxtaposition of the gory war with the word sweet. :) it adds the right amount of irony.

or maybe sarcasm is a better word..

I love the line: “rules bend, laws break, corpse counts that sweet britain fakes.”
This poem paints such an awesomely detailed picture. Full marks from Kihd the kid! :)

Wow, lovely and horrific at the same time.