I love the visibility of his anger! Like – is it – colour synethsysia? (???) It’s nice to see the protagonist look on as a third party too.
‘Levelled’ – is this like some RPG game in real world?

Great piece. Really shows his anger. And I like the twist that it’s possible that teammate he trusted may have betrayed him. You don’t often see the betrayer narrated in 1st person. Good job.