I like it. It’s a well written character piece with what could be a little twist at the end. I’m finding this short format lends itself to ambiguous endings that leave the reader wanting more or not quite sure what happens next. Seems like you’re finding the same thing.

Personally my favorite type of ending, so it works well.

I agree with Thelonious, and you really seem to be getting good at using this short format to your advantage.