This is beautifully done, and I’m a sucker for psychic abilities in stories.

And I couldn’t help myself…I sequeled. Hope you don’t mind. :)

I’m glad you liked it. I posted it feeling like it was kind of clunky. I need to get my writing chops back after having taken 7+ days off.

And I’m glad you sequelled! I love it!

Lovely beginning and worked very well to describe his situation and feelings.

I’ve always wondered how best to allude to a multitude of others’ thoughts, fearing I’d just annhialate the readers’ flow if I tried….but here you do it so simply and poetically. I, too, am a sucker for the psychic ability in stories, and the way you handled the technicality and beautifully drawn detail is enjoyable.

Thanks! It was fun to write. :)

nice hook! I agree with above statements. :)

Thanks, Elsha. :)