interesting turn of events. too bad you had to TELL us he was saved.. you could have had him deliriously spy a face or some quirk, that he again spies upon awaking, so that we know he knows he was saved. Also, to the reader, these two are faceless. how do we know one traveler from one savior?
I admit that I’ve not done a good job in distinguishing identities, I promise I’ll work on this, thank you for your insight on that, been awhile since I’ve written anything…
ElshaHawk (LoA)
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