Inspired by the story “The Tiger or The Lady”. We had to write sequels in my class, and I made the princess have a nervous twitch. It turns out the same as this story basically, just with modified details.

i like the twitch, it makes for a wonderful twist ending.

That was funny and definitely didn’t see it coming. Though in reality if you fire a blank into your temple it can still kill you. Some actor died that way, I think. All nicely told and nicely wrapped together within the space of a ficly.

Kind of amusing in a morbid sort of way. Fate still got ’im… just in a different way.

@THX- Holy crap…my friend tried to convince me to shoot him with a blank! I’m not sure what to say now…

@PJ- Yep, my mind was debating on whether he was a thief or not, and I came to the conclusion that I had no clue.

Anyone else- I had no mre characters left so I couldn’t fix this, but in the third paragraph the last two sentences should be in italics or something to show that Bud was thinking it. Just to clarify. :)

*more

A whole different kind of Russian roulette. I like it. Tony’s a pretty fun character and I like how casually you describe someone blowing his head off.

I thought he was going to make it out alive… The main character always makes it….. But then I realized he wasn’t the main character. And that kind of deception for a first in a series is so clever I’ll use it sometime.

Great story. You’ve got me hooked to whatever this is going to be.

I wasn’t planning on it becoming anything, but since it became featured, maybe I will do something with it. This could be fun.

Thanks for all the great comments!

it was awesome…in a…. odd sort of way.. i lime it alot :)

Thanks :B