Only one thing had me stumbling for a moment, and that was “Whozzer?” It took me a while to work out that this was “Who’s there?” ‘cause it doesn’t look like it should be pronounced that way.

This is intriguing! I can’t wait to find out what “sender” means.
I understood the “whozzer?” thing, probably just by luck.

I quite like this story of yours, Robert. Another sequel, this time after reading your story tags.

Intriguing start. A bit hard to follow, but that sort of fits the whole thing.

This is some solid work here dude. I really love the synonym blast towards the end. It really strings together the understanding, fear, and confusion of the antagonist all at once. Real solid.

Just reading this series from the start and can’t believe no one gave you 5 out of 5 for this intriguing start.It catches my attention and the sender question works! I’ll read on.

I hadn’t seen this before. Intriguing!