This is kind of disturbing.
Very well written.

Thanks. I wanted to write a story about someone paying far too much attention to something trivial as something much more important happened around him. This is what came out.

O.O um….

Hey, thanks for the well worded 1-star review! Glad to make new fans. ;)

hmm that’s quite some ADD and vanity..
It all happens rather fast for me, and leaves me feeling like I stepped off of a dizzying ride.

Haha, I love little morbid affairs like this. The transition was what really caught my attention. His momentary distraction at his reflection got me hoping he wouldn’t do exactly what you had him do, and it’s so sudden! Coming out of nowhere. Well done sir!