I can’t get over how cool his confidence is.. If there isn’t a sequel I don’t know what I’ll do. I wish I had that kinda confidence. Definetly cooler than me. ;D

Coors Light? Really? Man, we have to get you a real beer.

I agree with a dislocated rebel…you would be much cooler with a real beer…something Australian would jump you up a long way, but if you decided on some independent German brewer’s house bier, then the coolness would be unbeatable.

Yeah, the Coors light is just because the club doesn’t really carry any real beers (and no pints…people drop them all the time) so bottles is it. Plus I do kinda like Coors light. Hah!

I like water too, just not when I order a beer.

booo. J/k M.B.E. Welcome to the wonderful land of ficly, brotha! Now, off to wreck your well crafted story with a sequel…

Ebullent… I’m looking that one up— I won’t even pretend I knew what that meant (my mac is telling me I spelled it wrong because it doesn’t even recognize this word. Dumb mac). Wonderful descriptions— the story moves along very naturally from the sharp visuals you impart. I agree, very cool, confident, and well worth 5 stars.

Ebullent… I’m looking that one up— I won’t even pretend I knew what that meant (my mac is telling me I spelled it wrong because it doesn’t even recognize this word. Dumb mac). Wonderful descriptions— the story moves along very naturally from the sharp visuals you impart. I agree, very cool, confident, and well worth 5 stars.

I’ll leave the embellishing to fictional works…Coors light is what I drank.

I know nothing about alcohol, but I know a good story when I see one.
Five outta five.

I agree with the Coors haters. I drink Peroni… not exactly a man’s lager but you know…
I especially love the descriptions of the women. Very appealing to the senses and I’m sure could turn anyone onto the hunt and also the characters are so real in their God awful sleaziness (but I’m guessing that they are real?? M.(att?) B. Evans and the Winslow man)
This is pretty awesome start and I love the detail. You better follow through, sir!
(I would reccomend putting spaces betwixt the paragraphs for clarity and not rating yourself :P)

Brand new. Thanks for the tip.

No problem doffs hat

oooh, it’s ‘ebullient’ you’re missing the i, matey. arrr (pirate speak)

Yeah I know. Hah! We all make mistakes dammit.

a lot of mystery in here.. what is his.. and how high is his tab? lol.

a lot of mystery in here.. what is his.. and how high is his tab? lol.

Congrats on the feature!

I feel out of my league knowing nothing about beer. xD Should us younger writers research this so our stories can get the more mature edge?

So many people talking about beer…. How old are the people on this site? lmao

Definitely some mystery to this story. It keeps you guessing. Matt has this unbeatably air of confidence to him that’s shown through the writing. Good job :)

Yea, a beer story! Boo, a beer story about macro swill! :)