Nice, I like the balance of romance with understandable anxiety about the whole proposition.

Cool pen name, by the way.

Nice standalone piece, with a fitting sentimental feel to it throughout. Gushy in a good way.

Thanks for the comments. This is one of those things that I really don’t like writing, but I couldn’t get it out of my head until it was written. I just tried to keep from gushing too much.

Afraid I can’t take credit for the pen name, though. That’s my real name, believe it or not.