Very poignant reflection on memory and things that are forgotten. Minor critique, starting sentences with conjunctions takes away some strength from the writing. I know we all do it when speaking, but it’s something to work on. Definitely a piece I could relate to.
Very poignant reflection on memory and things that are forgotten. Minor critique, starting sentences with conjunctions takes away some strength from the writing. I know we all do it when speaking, but it’s something to work on.
Definitely a piece I could relate to.
Thanks for the feedback, noted!