Comments on Assassin's Surprise by Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Kihd

I love this! Totally unexpected. I thought that was going to be a massacre or something.
My favorite lines were the ones about assassins being unimaginative, and the one about the fence accident. I love your writing style; it rocks.
Five outta five.
- Posted about 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Tanks dude :3
- Posted about 9 years ago.
M.B. Evans

Hey…I seriously doubt Blackbeard was unimaginative.

Love it.
- Posted about 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Jessica Cahill

There’s lots of great little details in this piece, and I love the ending!
- Posted about 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Tad Winslow

“…although the rest of us imagine a more mundane type of accident involving a fence.”

HA!
- Posted about 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Riley

i like it, it was… cool.. WAYYYY Bbetter then my suck ass stories… then again.. EVERYTHING IS BETTER THEN MY STROIES
- Posted about 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

ha! not too smart of them all to gather in one place, unless they are planning something bigger than a party..
- Posted about 9 years ago.
Empty J

Ha, love the tone. Nice work.
- Posted about 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Marli

I did not expect this. Whoever heard of a birthday party whilst working for “The Association”.
- Posted about 9 years ago.
Amaris Wolfe

I wonder how he/she reacts. Do they freak out?
Very fun writing.
- Posted about 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5