Very nice. I like that you give some details to the back story, and grim ones at that, then it goes right into pragmatics and action.

Very interesting. We’re in Russia. Perhaps I should have guessed that, but I hadn’t put any thought into the location at all. For whatever reason, I hadn’t yet considered going through the coat pockets, but again the time was right to do just that.

I like the back story a lot, and the time was absolutely appropriate to put some of that in. There’s a very nice fit to what I have in mind (which might change at any moment).

I can see where this needs to go next, so look for a sequel within the next day or so.

Randomly landed here, makes me want to read the series to really see the danger and get a feel for the world as it is.

I feel like this could become an awesome video game.

Every installment so far conninues to peak my interest more and more. Great job!