I like the general idea of this. I’m not sure I love all the rhyme…. but it’s good.

I like the general idea of this. I’m not sure I love all the rhyme…. but it’s good.

=3 cool! thx!

I like this too. It could use some cleaning up, but even with its faults it comes across clearly enough. Good job expressing your complex emotions… and unlike Lady Bug— I’m sure I like all of the rhyme :)

:3

The idea is good and I do love the rhyme. It’s just a shame it isn’t structured more clearly.