A neat idea with some great imagery. I got a bit lost in that first paragraph though. The last line was nicely poetic though, and a nice change of pace from all the puns that got entered in this challenge.
Yeah I wrote this entire thing around the last couple of paragraphs after the idea for them hit me… At two in the morning… After I had turned off my computer and settled into bed…
Yeah I wrote this entire thing around the last couple of paragraphs after the idea for them hit me…
At two in the morning…
After I had turned off my computer and settled into bed…