Nice reflection piece on the tragedy of growing up and the loss of innocence. Might have been better to find a different kind of donut than apple, maybe a pumpkin spice one? And you missed a comma in the second sentence of the second paragraph. Nice job conveying the moods and the idea.
Nice reflection piece on the tragedy of growing up and the loss of innocence.
Might have been better to find a different kind of donut than apple, maybe a pumpkin spice one? And you missed a comma in the second sentence of the second paragraph.
Nice job conveying the moods and the idea.
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