I like how nothing here is too obvious – it’s open to interpretation. Personally, I thought the dance acted as a really nice metaphor for a relationship – perhaps one teetering on the edge… Which is ironic, seeing as the tango is so confident and overtly passionate as a dance.

Good work, much enjoyed – the Spanish added a nice exotic touch, though the ellipses in the last two lines seemed a bit clunky to me. Personal taste perhaps! MH :)

Hmm… I usually like ellipses, but I think you’re right in this case MH. I’ll tweak that presently. Glad you liked it!

The movement of this piece is lovely.

I love thisss. :)
I’m glad you did a poem.

I have noticed that you use a lot of Spanish in comments and stories. That is awesome since I can speak and read it whixh makes reading your works very much enjoyable. Muchas gracias, mi amiga!