Cute! Would like to see where this is going. Who is Susan to him? Who is Kyle?? Hmmmmm?? :)

Thanks, JC. That’s all coming up. I appreciate you taking the time to read it.

You have a nice writing style. I like to be left out on a limb.

great description of the scene and his emotion shines through! Congrats on feature! I think the 4 pencils means we crave a bit more action, but you have a lot of great things in here. I’m giving you a 5 for presentation, which is stellar.

Pretty cool. Made me reflect on those rare occurances where I want to be single, but then married, adult life interrupts the fun.