wow, HOT, i like the unexpected kiss.

Thanks to you for leaving it so wide open so I could sneak in.

Hey, Marli’s back! Nice twist there by making the narrator be a ‘James’. Good, steady, story building here. Welcome back. I missed you during those 3 months you were inactive :) I hope your muse is fully regenerated.

Hey there Tad Nice to be back in the land of make believe Much nicer to be welcomed by an esteemed collegue such as yourself

ppft tad you’re so funny! ‘james’ ..
such a great driver name, we all know what that phrase means. ’home james." it has to be said with an accent too!

I wondered if someone would get it ha,ha A real british accent in an American saga

Did you mean ‘curb’, or is that a British spelling or something. I like the turnabout that the ex is repulsed as she was (or he was?) earlier.

I didn’t think the narrator was male, even though he called her James. It is just a figure of speech that I use for everyone, regardless of gender. I like the way the revulsion was mirrored back to her.

@THX. Just an aussie slang. I like that you didn’t know if it was a he or she. Works better if it is a male though. haha.

@smdasilva. A story can go either way. Like that you think he/she is a male. Thanks for for comments much appreciated.