Great ending, and the psychology of the situation works well from this guy’s perspective—felt real. Any reason you haven’t strung the sequels together? I know there are lots of parts, but they’re not tied as sequels and prequels.
I wrote the last four in a very short space of time and was somewhat overeager to get them posted, resulting in the orphaned parts. I’ve been working on a way to fix it, but I’ve been unable to delete stories and can’t figure out how to label an existing story as a sequel.
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