Nicely told, still very dreamlike. The ending got a bit confusing, though I know you were going for the poetic. Not sure what you meant by inflection there at the end either.

Inflection is the wrong word, I changed it.

This is a poem story. I used subtle numerical repitition, alliteration, and rhyme. D words end each paragraph. Each paragraph is four lines roughly with similar lengths to all four lines…ok, now I’m adding something to the story just to throw everything I just said about it all off….dang, only one character left to do nothing with… PLUM DID IT