I know her heart was beginning to warm by the end of yours, Elsha… but I felt like darkening the mood a little more before she redeems herself and shows us her good nature— and if she even has much of a capacity for a good nature remains to be seen now.

I love how you made it like a school, and she a teacher, which was NOTHING like what I had in mind :) You also brought around some of the responsibility she feels to the earth, being a star like she is, which was something i hadn’t thought of. I was hoping the little kid would make her realize her destiny, but you have chosen to take her back to the listlessness, which proves she is becoming more human every day and less star.

Different take whilst keeping within character. I like the way she is playing with the star…gives opportunity for another sequel.

She seems very jaded. What a sad attitude she has. You expressed it well.

I have some ideas about what to do next, but I want to let PJ have a go..

oh wait til you’ve seen what i’ve done!!