Just cuz I think this could easily be made better… “…the grass feeling wet..”
You might want to go with …“the grass felt wet…”
Otherwise good addition with a lot of action taking place. I’ve definitely stepped into the middle of something I know nothing of, but I could still enjoy the scene…so that’s a plus.
A perfect title for a piece fizzing with action – taking the story in a more magical route than ‘witch accusation’ stories often go…
Enjoyed it, even if Nessy’s streetwise dialogue didn’t quite seem to match with her characterisation in the prequel – perhaps her previous shock was a ruse to fool the goons?