You can write this good or most likely better. All it takes is some time and practice. All I meant was thanks for the comment. In regards to writing better, read a ton and write a ton and you’ll get there— no one starts at the top. It takes a lot of hard work.
“Where the violin of a cricket”. How can anyone wax so lyrical. You are a gem, Tad I would be quoting “big brass bands at midnight”, in reference to crickets.
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